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Crooks in Of Mice and Men: Steinbeck uses Crooks to argue that one person’s suffering inside a racist system cannot be fixed by individuals alone, and that the American Dream was never built to include Black workers in the first place. The arc grid below tracks Crooks from his absence in the opening bunkhouse, through the harness-room dream and Curley’s wife’s threat, to his silent place at the edge of the barn at the end, and gives you a complete Grade 9 exam answer plan, fully analysed and ready to reproduce in the exam.

Most Of Mice and Men guides online are quote dumps in a school blazer. This one is for Edexcel International GCSE English Literature Paper 1, where you do not have to do language analysis.

  • every key character moment covered ✓
  • what they say, do, and reveal ✓
  • personality traits made clear ✓
  • context woven in, not dumped like an unwanted PE kit ✓
  • headings you can turn into essay introductions ✓

No microscope waffle. Just the exam you are actually sitting.

Contents

Who is Crooks?

Crooks is the Black stable buck on the ranch in Of Mice and Men, the only Black worker in the novel. Here is what he does, in order:

  • Before he ever appears the bunkhouse is already a white-only world; he is the man segregation has erased.
  • On Friday morning Candy describes him for us as a stable buck with a bent back, and his reputation is set before he speaks.
  • On Friday night he fetches Slim from the bunkhouse doorway, useful to the men but never welcomed inside.
  • On Saturday night in his harness room he is forced to defend his humanity, taunts Lennie, and reaches once for the dream farm.
  • Curley’s wife threatens to have him lynched; he goes silent, withdraws his offer, and rubs liniment alone on his bent spine.
  • By the ending he watches the barn from the edge, says nothing, and the colour bar has not moved at all.

What is the purpose of Crooks?

AspectSummary
FunctionRepresents the discriminated Black population in society.
ArcNo growth. Depicts racism and the colour bar. Criticises the American Dream (excludes non-white people). The vulnerable are not innocent: Crooks also discriminates and segregates.

What is the message of Crooks?

Steinbeck ends by saying this: one person’s suffering inside a racist system cannot be fixed by individuals alone. The system itself has to change. And in this novel, it does not.

What themes does Crooks support?

Crooks carries five of the novel’s biggest ideas. Each one comes back in the Why-Steinbeck row of every section below:

  • Racism and the colour bar
  • Loneliness, silence and segregation
  • The American Dream that excluded Black people
  • The vulnerable are not innocent
  • Power, threat and the cost of speaking up

Crooks plotline by section

Use these bullets to remember every action Crooks takes, in order. He does not appear in Section One, so the plotline starts from Section Two. The Saturday-night harness-room scene in Section Four is the long one and gives you most of the spine of any answer that needs precise plot reference.

Section Two – Bunkhouse Arrival (Friday Morning)

  • George and Lennie are new ranch hands meeting the staff.
  • Old Candy mentions Crooks, the stable buck, in conversation.
  • Crooks is the only black man on the ranch.
  • His back is crooked from a horse’s kick.
  • The boss gave him hell for the new men’s lateness.
  • Candy says Crooks reads books and keeps to himself.
  • He once fought a ranch hand at Christmas and won.
  • From outside a voice yells for the stable buck.

Section Three – Bunkhouse Evening (Friday Night)

  • George, Slim, Candy and Carlson are gathered in the bunkhouse.
  • Crooks puts his head in to fetch Slim.
  • He has warmed tar for a mule’s split hoof.
  • He warns Slim that Lennie is handling the puppies.
  • Slim follows him out to deal with both.

Section Four – Crooks’s Room (Saturday Night)

  • Crooks lives alone in a harness room off the barn.
  • He sleeps in a long box filled with straw.
  • He owns books, including the California civil code.
  • His room is neat; he is proud and aloof.
  • His crooked spine forces him to lean to one side.
  • He rubs liniment into his back to ease the pain.
  • Most men have gone into Soledad on Saturday night.
  • Lennie wanders in, drawn by Crooks’s light.
  • Crooks resents the intrusion but slowly softens.
  • He explains he is barred from the bunkhouse for being black.
  • He recalls his father’s chicken ranch in California.
  • He remembers playing with white children as a boy.
  • Crooks taunts Lennie: suppose George never came back?
  • He admits he is talking about his own loneliness.
  • He says a man goes mad without companionship.
  • Lennie grows angry and threatening; Crooks retreats.
  • Old Candy joins them, the first white visitor in years.
  • Crooks scoffs at Lennie’s talk of a dream farm.
  • He says nobody ever actually gets the land.
  • Candy insists they have the money already.
  • Crooks tentatively asks if he could join the plan.
  • Curley’s wife appears, looking for company and trouble.
  • She mocks the three men as weaklings.
  • Crooks orders her to leave his room.
  • She threatens to have him lynched if he speaks up.
  • Crooks shrinks, accepting his powerlessness completely.
  • He says nothing more after she goes.
  • George arrives angry and takes Lennie and Candy away.
  • Crooks tells Candy to forget the offer to join.
  • He returns to rubbing liniment on his bent spine.

Section Five – The Barn (Sunday Afternoon)

  • Lennie has accidentally killed Curley’s wife in the barn.
  • Crooks follows the men into the barn at a distance.
  • He keeps back, out of attention range, watching.
Crooks standing in the bunkhouse doorway while ranch workers look on
Middle 2: Crooks puts his head into the bunkhouse to fetch Slim and immediately withdraws, useful to the men but never one of them.

Crooks character arc analysis

Each section below shows what Crooks does and why Steinbeck wrote him this way. The table is the analysis. Read it like a Grade 9 answer plan, and bring the closing thesis line straight into your conclusion.

Beginning: Absent from the Ranch World

Overall PointMini-Points and Evidence

Beginning point: 

Absent; the ranch is already a white-only world.

Crooks has not appeared yet. But the world he lives in is already fully built. It is a world that does not include him, and it will not change.

Crooks’s absence reveals the ranch as an all-white world:

Crooks does not appear in the opening. The bunkhouse is full of white workers. Steinbeck shows us a world that has no space for a Black man before we have even met one.

The men share the bunkhouse, the yard, and Slim’s room freely. Nobody questions why. This tells us that keeping Black and white workers apart is completely normal to everyone on the ranch.

His exclusion is structural, not personal:

Nobody mentions that a Black worker is missing from the bunkhouse. Nobody thinks it is strange. His exclusion is not one person’s choice. It is just the way things are.

When something unfair is never questioned, it becomes invisible. Steinbeck shows us that racial segregation (keeping people apart because of their skin colour) works this way. It does not need to be violent to do its damage.

Steinbeck establishes racial hierarchy before Crooks speaks:

Steinbeck builds the whole world of the ranch without Crooks in it. By the time Crooks appears, readers already feel the shape of the gap he fills. His absence is itself a statement.

Everything Crooks says and does later in the story only makes sense because of this opening. Without it, his loneliness would look like a personal problem. With it, we see it is a social one.

Why does Steinbeck present this moment this way?

Social Realism: Social Realism means showing life as it really is. Steinbeck shows that segregation does not need drama or violence to hurt people. It just needs to be the normal way of things.

Historical Context: In 1930s California, the colour bar was a real and common rule. It meant Black and white workers lived and ate in separate spaces. Steinbeck did not invent this. He is describing what he saw.

Steinbeck’s message: Steinbeck’s point is this: racism does not always shout. Often it is quiet, built into daily life, and accepted without question. That is what makes it so hard to fight.

Middle 1: Defined by Others

Overall PointMini-Points and Evidence

Middle 1

PONT:  Defined by others before he has even spoken.

The men have already decided who Crooks is before he walks through a door. That label is fixed. Steinbeck’s question is whether anything can break through it.

Crooks is defined by others before he can define himself:

Old Candy tells George and Lennie about Crooks before he appears. He says Crooks is the stable buck, that his back is bent from a horse’s kick, and that he keeps to himself.

Every fact Candy gives is about Crooks’s job or his body. Nobody mentions what Crooks thinks or feels. He is described like a piece of equipment, not a person.

He is presented as useful but separate from the male community:

Candy tells us Crooks is part of the ranch. But he is not part of the group. He is someone the men know about, not someone they know.

Candy also mentions that Crooks once won a fight at Christmas. This is said like a curious fact, not a reason to respect him. It is the way someone might talk about a strong working animal.

Crooks’s reputation is filtered entirely through white voices:

Everything we know about Crooks at this point comes from Candy, who is white. Crooks has not spoken. He has no chance to tell his own story.

Steinbeck does this on purpose. In 1930s America, Black people were described and judged by white society. Their own voices were rarely heard. This introduction mirrors that reality exactly.

Why does Steinbeck present this moment this way?

Social Realism: Steinbeck shows how communities reduce people without meaning to. Candy is not cruel. But his description of Crooks strips away everything that makes Crooks a full human being.

Historical Context: During the Great Depression, Black workers had the lowest status on ranches. They were given the hardest, dirtiest jobs and kept out of shared social spaces. Candy’s description reflects this accurately.

Steinbeck’s message: Steinbeck is saying that racism works through words as much as through actions. When one group controls how another group is described, that is its own form of power.

Middle 2: Useful, Never Included

Overall PointMini-Points and Evidence

Middle 2

PONT:  Useful to the men; never one of them.

Crooks has done his job and disappeared. Being needed does not mean being included. His bigger scene, later in the story, will show what years of this treatment have done to him.

Crooks is functional to the men but not included by them:

Crooks puts his head into the bunkhouse to fetch Slim. He has warmed tar for a mule’s hoof and wants to warn Slim that Lennie is mishandling the puppies.

Both of his tasks involve animals. He cares for mules and watches the dogs. On this ranch, Crooks’s job puts him closer to the livestock than to the men.

He performs his role and immediately withdraws:

Crooks delivers his message and leaves. He does not stay. He knows the bunkhouse is not his space. Staying would cost him something he cannot afford.

This quick exit builds on what we learned earlier: he keeps to himself. But it is not a choice he was born with. It is a habit he has learned for survival.

His brief appearance confirms his status as a peripheral figure:

Slim takes the information Crooks brings and walks out without thanking him. The scene moves on. Crooks is not mentioned again. He is used and forgotten in the same breath.

Steinbeck’s point is clear. Crooks is close enough to be needed but too far away to be seen as a person. He exists at the very edge of the white community.

Why does Steinbeck present this moment this way?

Social Realism: Steinbeck shows that being excluded does not always mean being invisible. Crooks is called on, given tasks, and responded to. But he is never truly seen. That gap between being used and being valued is what Steinbeck is exploring.

Historical Context: On 1930s Californian ranches, Black workers were often given jobs caring for animals. They were kept out of the spaces where white workers relaxed and socialised. Their value was economic, not personal.

Steinbeck’s message: Steinbeck is making an important argument. Being useful is not the same as being respected. A person can be needed every day and still be treated as less than fully human.

Middle 3: Crooks’s Room

Overall PointMini-Points and Evidence

Middle 3

PONT:  Both victim of racism and capable of cruelty.

He has shown his pain and his cruelty in the same scene. The tiny hope of the dream farm is already gone. Nothing has changed. He knows exactly how little power he has.

Crooks is forced to defend his humanity on his own territory:

Lennie wanders into Crooks’s harness room. Crooks tells him to leave. His room is neat and private. It has books and a copy of the California civil code. It is the only space that truly belongs to him.

Crooks explains to Lennie that he is banned from the bunkhouse because he is Black. The bunkhouse men are not allowed in his room either. The colour bar (the rule separating Black and white people) controls every part of his life.

He uses cruelty as a weapon against someone even more vulnerable:

Crooks taunts Lennie. He asks what Lennie would do if George never came back. He describes the feeling of having nobody. Then he admits he is really talking about himself.

Crooks is cruel to Lennie, who has a learning disability and cannot defend himself. This shows something important: victims of cruelty do not always become kind people. Sometimes they pass their pain onto someone weaker.

Crooks briefly imagines a life beyond racial exclusion:

Candy tells him the dream farm is real. The money exists. Crooks quietly asks if there might be room for him. This is the only moment in the novel where he hopes for something better.

He remembers his father’s chicken ranch in California and the white children he played with as a boy. Before the colour bar hardened around him, he had a different life. That memory still lives inside him.

He is crushed back into powerlessness by Curley’s Wife’s threat:

Crooks tells Curley’s wife to leave his room. She threatens to accuse him of rape and have him lynched (killed by a mob without a trial). He goes completely silent. He shrinks. He does not speak again.

This moment shows how little protection Crooks has. A single sentence from a white woman can destroy him. The one space he owns can be taken from him instantly. He has no defence and nowhere to turn.

Why does Steinbeck present this moment this way?

Social Realism: Social Realism means showing real, complicated people. Steinbeck does not make Crooks a perfect victim. He is also capable of cruelty. Both things are true at the same time.

Historical Context: Lynching was a real danger for Black men in 1930s America. The threat Curley’s wife makes is not just nasty words. It is a reference to actual violence that happened regularly. Crooks’s fear is completely rational.

Steinbeck’s message: Steinbeck is saying that unfair systems do not always produce innocent victims. People who are treated badly sometimes treat others badly too. That is one of the most damaging things an unjust system does.

Middle 4: Hope Withdrawn

Overall PointMini-Points and Evidence

Middle 4

PONT:  Hope collapses; he retreats into familiar isolation.

He has gone quiet and gone back to the liniment. The novel gave him one moment of hope and then took it away immediately. That is Steinbeck’s clearest and most painful point about race.

Crooks withdraws the offer without explanation or protest:

George arrives and takes Lennie and Candy away. Before they go, Crooks quietly tells Candy to forget his offer to join the farm. He does not argue. He does not explain. He simply closes the door on hope.

His withdrawal is instant. He does not try to negotiate or keep even a small part of the dream alive. Curley’s wife’s threat has reminded him, very clearly, of exactly where he stands.

He accepts his powerlessness as a permanent condition:

Crooks says nothing more after this. The section ends with him rubbing liniment into his bent spine. This is the same action that opened the scene. Nothing has moved. Nothing has changed.

Every time power has been used against Crooks in this novel, he has gone quiet. Not because he has nothing to say. But because speaking costs him more than silence does.

His return to the liniment is Steinbeck’s most devastating image:

The liniment is for the real pain in his back. But it also stands for something bigger. Rubbing it in alone, in private, with nobody watching, is the image of a man who has only himself for comfort.

Steinbeck ends Crooks’s key scene with this quiet image on purpose. The dream was never really his to reach for. The cost of trying was a sharp reminder of that fact.

Why does Steinbeck present this moment this way?

Social Realism: Steinbeck does not give Crooks a moment of dignity that lasts. Social Realism means telling the truth even when the truth is bleak. The conditions win. That is what actually happened to people like Crooks.

Historical Context: The Great Depression hurt Black workers far more than white workers. Government programmes that helped white Americans largely left Black Americans out. The colour bar on the ranch reflects conditions across the whole country.

Steinbeck’s message: Steinbeck’s argument is that the American Dream was never built to include Black people. Crooks does not give up his dream because he is weak. He gives it up because he is being realistic about a system that excludes him.

Crooks sitting alone in the harness room after the dream is withdrawn
Middle 4 to Ending: Crooks rubs liniment into his bent spine alone in the harness room after the dream has been withdrawn.

Ending: Invisible by Necessity

Overall PointMini-Points and Evidence

Ending Point: 

Invisible by necessity; racism has the final word.

He watches from the edge at the end, just as he did at the beginning. The colour bar has not moved. Steinbeck’s message is quiet and devastating: for men like Crooks, nothing changes.

Crooks stays at the edge, invisible and unremarked:

After Curley’s wife is found dead, Crooks follows the men into the barn. But he hangs back. He stays out of the way. He watches from the edges. This is exactly where he has been all novel.

Nobody speaks to him. Nobody calls on him. He adds nothing to what is happening because nobody expects him to. His presence at the edge of this final scene is a last confirmation that nothing has changed.

His silence in the final scene completes his arc of exclusion:

In his own section, Crooks argued, spoke bitterly, and reached for hope. Here he says nothing at all. The journey from difficult speech to total silence shows what the colour bar does to a person over time.

Every silence in this novel has built on the last. He went quiet after Curley’s wife threatened him. He went quiet when he withdrew the offer. Now, at the end, silence is all that is left.

Steinbeck gives Crooks no resolution because society offers none:

George ends the novel with an action, however terrible. Lennie ends it with death. Even Candy has a moment of grief and rage. Crooks simply fades from the edge of the scene. There is no moment for him.

This is Steinbeck’s final point about race. The novel ends exactly as it began: a world where Crooks is on the outside. The distance between his life at the start and his life at the end is zero.

Why does Steinbeck present this moment this way?

Social Realism: Steinbeck gives Crooks no kind exit. No dignity, no last line, no recognition. Social Realism means not softening the ending. The world moves on without him, and that is the whole point.

Historical Context: For Black Americans in 1930s rural California, the conditions Crooks lives in were completely normal. Segregated housing. Constant threat of violence. No real legal protection. Steinbeck does not invent this. He reports it.

Steinbeck’s message: Steinbeck ends by saying this: one person’s suffering inside a racist system cannot be fixed by individuals alone. The system itself has to change. And in this novel, it does not.

Conclusion

Steinbeck’s Crooks is invisible in the opening bunkhouse, defined for us by Candy on Friday morning, useful at the bunkhouse doorway on Friday night, forced to defend his humanity in his harness room on Saturday night before Curley’s wife crushes him with a single threat, silent as he withdraws the offer and rubs liniment into his bent spine, and watching the barn from the edge on Sunday afternoon as the world moves on without him. The novel’s argument is hard and clear: one person’s suffering inside a racist system cannot be fixed by individuals alone, the American Dream was never built to include Black workers, and the vulnerable are not innocent because the system also turns them on each other. Six sections, one Crooks, and now you have it for the exam.

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