Quick Answer
Banquo is presented as a loyal soldier and moral foil to Macbeth. Where Macbeth succumbs to the witches’ prophecies, Banquo resists, demonstrating the self-restraint Macbeth lacks. Shakespeare uses Banquo’s ghost to embody Macbeth’s guilt, showing that the consequences of unchecked ambition cannot be outrun.
Key aspects of Banquo’s portrayal:
- Banquo functions as a moral foil, showing the path of integrity Macbeth refuses to take.
- His resistance to the witches’ temptations signals his faith and self-control, contrasting sharply with Macbeth’s susceptibility.
- Shakespeare presents Banquo as a devoted father whose ambitions, unlike Macbeth’s, are directed toward his heirs rather than himself.
- Banquo’s ghost at the banquet scene externalises Macbeth’s guilt, haunting him before the court.
- His murder marks the point at which Macbeth’s crimes become impossible to contain or justify.
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Banquo Quotes & Character Analysis
When answering a question about any character, you’ll get top marks if you understand and explain how that character grows and improves as the story progresses.
However, a tragedy like Macbeth is different because the Tragic Hero shifts from being good to being bad. Banquo also dies for being good – so what’s going on?
Banquo, the equal of Macbeth, is a role model to show audiences how Macbeth should have behaved because by waiting, Banquo trusted in God’s plan and was rewarded in the afterlife.
Let’s find out more…
Banquo’s Character Story Arc.
Your examiner will love it if you analyse how your character transforms as the story progresses.
That’s why your exam essay will have an introduction, conclusion and 3 main paragraphs. Each paragraph will explore either the beginning, middle or end of the character’s transformation. Here’s how this character develops…
BEGINNING
Our first impression of Banquo is of a loyal man and good Christian that rejects the supernatural.
MIDDLE
Banquo also struggles with his conscience but, unlike Macbeth, he remains loyal to God and king.
END
Banquo is an example of how Macbeth should have behaved.
Banquo’s Speedy Character Storyline
Every character has a personal storyline (a story arc) that fits within the overall story. To get the highest grades, you must understand how each character functions as a tool of the writer helping them to deliver the overall message.
Where Macbeth is guilty of greed as well as disobeying the will of God, Banquo remains committed to God’s plan, accepting that his fate and Fortune is not in his own hands, unlike Macbeth.
REVISION TIP! You won’t reach the highest grades if you don’t even know the story!
Try writing the plot points out on flashcards. jumble them up and practice putting them into the proper order so you don’t get mixed up with events in the exam.
Essay Guide: How does Shakespeare present Banquo?
Writing Your Essay Introduction
In your GCSE exam, you will get a question about a character or a theme. A standard essay contains a introduction and a conclusion and a main body with a number of analytical paragraphs in it.
Typically, during an exam, you want to write three paragraphs in your main body – each paragraph can depict the beginning middle and end of each character journey and transformation.
Some of you have to write an entire essay from memory, whereas others will need to refer to an extract that you are given in the exam.
If you have an extract question, the information on this guide is still super useful. Decide where the exam extract comes from in the character’s development and use quotes from that extract to create that specific paragraph. You can then use the ideas in this guide for your other paragraphs – simple!
What To Put In Your Introduction
FORMULA for INTRODUCTIONS
Character’s Function + Writer’s Message + Story Arc = Introduction
So, what is Banquo’s Character’s Function?
Banquo is used as a foil to exaggerate the Macbeth’s bad choices and to demonstrate the temptation of selfish ambition can be resisted.
A ‘foil’ is a character technique where one character is either the opposite of another or helps to exaggerate the main characters personality.
Both Macbeth and Banquo are equal status, both begin as brave and noble but both take very different paths. Even though Banquo is murdered he wins because his name goes down in history because his children become kings whereas Macbeth is forgotten.
What is the Message of the play?
Character Story Arc
Banquo is a loyal man and good Christian that rejects the supernatural. Though he struggles briefly with his conscience, unlike Macbeth, he remains loyal to God and king.
Introduction example.
Here are the 3 elements combined to create an introduction. See how the colours link to the FORMULA for INTRODUCTIONS above.
Banquo is used as a foil to exaggerate Macbeth’s bad choices and to help demonstrate the dangers of selfish ambition. Though he struggles briefly with his conscience, unlike Macbeth, he remains loyal to God and king.
Writing the Main Body of your Essay.
The 3 points of your 3 essay paragraphs
Your examiner will love it if you analyse how your character transforms as the story progresses. So, your exam essay will have an introduction, conclusion and 3 main paragraphs.
Each paragraph will deal either the beginning, middle or end of the character’s transformation.
HUH?
The points of an essay link directly to the three stages of development for a character.
So, the 3 points below link back to the three stages of Banquo’s development.
Scroll back up to the section about Banquo’s Story Arc if you can’t remember.
BEGINNING
Point 1
Banquo is a loyal man and good Christian that rejects the supernatural.
MIDDLE
Point 2
Banquo also struggles with his conscience but, unlike Macbeth, he remains loyal to God and king.
END
Point 3
Banquo is an example of how Macbeth should have behaved.
These 3 points will be the first lines of each of your main paragraphs. They explain how the character changes in the three different stages of the story.
You will also see them in the first section of the 3 individual table paragraph plans below.
Paragraph Plans: Quotes and Analyses.
Paragraph 1 Plan
| Point 1 | The first impression is of a loyal man and good Christian that rejects the supernatural. |
| Quote | “The instruments of darkness… win us with honest trifles – to betray” Act 1 Scene 3 |
| Quote Means | The devil works through these women; they use small truths to harm us. |
| When? | Macbeth and Banquo meet the witches for the first time and learn of the prophecies. |
| Language Analysis | Metaphor “instruments” – as in a tool – implies the witches are controlled by evil. Metaphor “darkness’ implies the devil and/or evil. Personification “honest trifles” – a thing of little value or importance – he feels the witches use tricks such as knowing that Macbeth would be awarded the the Thane of Cawdor’s title to gain Macbeth’s trust. It could be that the witches heard of the news before Banquo and Macbeth did. Emotive Language “betray” – trusting in the occult, supernatural and evil will lead to betrayal of Duncan and God (a theme within the play). It’s important to note that the the witches’ predictions came true implying that they somehow glimpsed God’s future plan (even if they couldn’t directly control it themaselves). |
| Writer’s Intention | – To present Banquo as Macbeth’s foil and his equal. His behaviour as the path that Macbeth should take. |
| Audience Response | Audiences will notice the different reactions between Macbeth and Banquo and may begin to feel tension as Banquo’s virtues reveal the cracks in Macbeth’s noble exterior. |
| Context | – England was a Christian country but believed witches to be real. – King James wrote a book about witches and condemning them as evil. |
| Personal Response | – This could be viewed as a form of Christian and Jacobean propaganda designed to keep society under control. – Guy Fawkes had recently failed to assassinate King James (Shakespeare’s king in real life). |
“The instruments of darkness… win us with honest trifles – to betray” Act 1 Scene 3
Paragraph 2 Plan
| Point 2 | Banquo also struggles with his conscience but unlike Macbeth remains loyal to God and king. |
| Quote | “Merciful powers, Restrain in me the cursèd thoughts that nature Gives.” Act 2 Scene 1 |
| Quote Means | God please help me to control the evil thoughts. |
| When? | While the king sleeps, Banquo discusses his dream of the three witches with Macbeth. They agree to talk more later. |
| Language Analysis | Personification “merciful powers” – represents his faith in the Christian religion and the Idea of God’s mercy. Irony “restrain me”– he believes only his faith in God can stop him from being evil. This implies that Macbeth lacks God’s protection. Metaphor “cursed thoughts” – ambition is presented as un-Christian and evil. Personification “nature gives” – implies that greed- a natural instinct – is given as a test by God. |
| Writer’s Intention | – To show that Banquo faced the same temptation as Macbeth but his internal struggles were dealt with more quickly because of his faith in God. – To portray that there is bad within everyone that must be resisted. |
| Audience Response | Audiences will be surprised that flawless Banquo is also struggling with his conscience but reassured by his faith in God. |
| Context | – Christians believe that selfish ambition is evil and that tests of temptation have to be passed in life to reach heaven. – They also believed that fate was decided by God and that it could not be changed. – Banquo respects God’s Chain of Being (the Christian idea that God’s power flows through Kings and down through the levels of society). |
| Personal Response | The play reinforces the class system encouraging society to keep within their status level and obey those in authority. |
Paragraph 3 Plan
| Point 3 | Banquo is an example of how Macbeth should have behaved. |
| Quote | “He hath a wisdom that doth guide his valor.” Act 3 Scene 1 |
| Quote Means | Banquo is protected by wisdom that guides him to be honourable. |
| When? | King Macbeth admits that Banquo is too honourable to be an ally so he orders assassins to kill him. Banquo suspects Macbeth of regicide. |
| Language Analysis | Personification “wisdom” – Banquo’s faith in God will “guide” him whereas Macbeth is surrounded by evil forces and temptation. Personification “valour” – bravery and ambition are presented as a force that needs control. Banquo’s is used selflessly for God and his king whereas Macbeth’s ambition becomes selfish greed. |
| Writer’s Intention | Banquo trusts in God, wisely accepts his fate and is rewarded in heaven whereas Macbeth tries to change his fate, calling on evil to inexplicably kill Duncan instead of waiting. |
| Audience Response | Audiences will admire Banquo as a role model but also fear for him. |
| Context | – In Shakespeare’s world, King James recently became King of England; there was tension because he was Scottish (the English and Scottish had a long history of war). – Guy Fawkes had recently failed to assassinate King James I, and Shakespeare was keen to criticise the act of regicide. – Though Banquo’s children are not crowned in the play, audiences know that King James is a real life descendant of Banquo which helps reinforce his right to rule. As a result, the play warns society to accept their position in life no matter how poor because they will be rewarded in heaven. |
| Personal Response | – Modern society now believes that fate can be changed. – It also believes that ambition is not selfish and should be encouraged in an age when class should be irrelevant. – However, the play still serves as a warning about the capacity for good and bad inside everyone and the need to make moral choices. |
How can I learn this information?
- Write the notes up as questions and answers in your own words.
- Then turn them into flashcards and/or practice tests.
- Learn the elements of a good answer (the headings on the left-hand side of the tables above).
- Memorise key quotes using flashcards, noting their meanings and contexts.
- Practise writing out the quotes on a piece of paper and then annotating the analysis around it to make a spider diagram. You should be able to mind map each paragraph inside 4 minutes (you would get 12 minutes in an exam to plan the whole essay).
- Read the scenes around each quote so that you know what’s going on and don’t make mistakes in the exam. As far as examiners are concerned, there’s no excuse to have not read the text.
- Use the essay plan in the guide to write out your own version of an essay.
- Make sure you know your character’s timeline.
Full written essay: How does Shakespeare present Banquo?
This what the introduction and the first of the three essay paragraphs could look like with all the elements from the three plans written up.
Notice:
- How the colours link to the section headings in the tables above.
- Also not that not much extra is added.
FREE ESSAY | How does Shakespeare present Banquo?
SUMMARY
That’s everything you need to know about Banquo’s character to get a Grade 9 in GCSE English for this question.
To learn about other Macbeth characters see our other guides.
There’s a lot of information here – probably too much to remember in one go. So, bookmark this page and come back to it whenever you need a reminder when you next have to analyse something.
For more tips on analysing LANGUAGE, check out our incredible GCSE English Language Analysis | EASY Beginner’s Grade 9 Guide.
If you want to learn more about analysing STRUCTURE, visit our incredible GCSE English Structure Analysis | EASY Grade 9 Guide
Need to learn about analysing Form? Visit our incredible GCSE English Form Analysis | EASY Beginner’s Grade 9 Guide.
Keep practising, stay curious, and you’ll be well on your way to mastering analysis in no time. Happy studying!
Peace.
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